The strongest technical aspect of this is the logo of the box. I had to get rid of the original krispy kreme logo and change it into what I have there. The colouring of the box could be improved. It could have more contrast across the box The easiest part was copying the ingredients. All I had to do was search for toothpaste ingredients. The hardest part was figuring out what I wanted to do for the project. I couldn't decide what type of box to do. I made a box of my own design. Next time I would chose a bigger box.
Collin Hensel In my project, the strongest technically part is the faded text, at the bottom, with a drop shadow behind it. I think that this makes the water look a lot better than if I just used normal text with no effects on it, and adds another level to the design. I think that the mast of the boat could be better, but I don't know any way to do it. I would like it to be more filled instead of how it looks now. The easiest part of this was adding the gradient to my background. The rest of the project took a lot more than lining up where I wanted the gradient to end than this did. The most difficult part of this was warping the S into my sail. It took a while for it to turn out the way that I wanted it to. I demonstrated the objected of this art activity by making a boat out of S's, and utilizing the tools that were introduced in this. If I were to do this again, I would probably chose a different letter to make it easier to do certain designs, like a C instead of my S...
THe colors work for this though I think the whole design is a bit flat. I do really like your logo design its simple but the O's out of donuts are creative and will sell to young kids lol.
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